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Eros affair: Harry to Draco: I promise not to wear underwear the next time we go out.
"and your damage done"

http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=16408

h/d. complete one-shot. rated nc-17.

Date: 2007-10-18 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Guh! That was phenomenal!

Okay, I looked at the word count, and saved the link to read later. Then I started reading ... and ... couldn't ... stop!

That was sooooo good, sooooo emotional, and it was such a perfect ending. I will not ask for a "wrap it up in a pretty bow and make it a fluffy ending" because it was PERFECT!

I was literally on the edge of my seat. The insecurities that come with life, the lethargy that day-to-day existence can bring upon a relationship. All the little details, how someone goes through life and ends up at a point where they are weak and have to make a decision. How you get yourself caught up in lies, how you get complacent, almost cocky about it. Living on the edge of a sword, not knowing when you might slip, or the balance shifts, and you go down. When she found out ... her response ... perfect! No matter who you think you are, and what you think you can get away with, karma can and will make you pay.

This was an absolutely awesome fic. Two big thumbs up!

Date: 2007-10-18 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twistedm.livejournal.com
*reels with happiness over your enthusiasm and praise*

umm... i know i'm an insecure little princess of a writer, but... you wouldn't be willing to post that review at skyehawke, would you?

Date: 2007-10-18 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Didn't know if I could, because I don't have an account. I'll try.

Meanwhile, I immediately emailed [livejournal.com profile] hd_prophet and gushed about it, so ...

Date: 2007-10-18 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twistedm.livejournal.com
Meanwhile, I immediately emailed hd_prophet and gushed about it, so ...

thank you so much! that also makes me happy and proud. :D

Date: 2007-10-18 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Well, who knew? I might have even posted comments there before, but I know there was one I couldn't, so I didn't try.

'Tis done, my insecure little princess of a writer. *giggles*

Date: 2007-10-21 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frayach-nicuill.livejournal.com
Hello, love. You broke my heart this morning. In the best possible way. Here's the rec. (http://frayach.livejournal.com/43902.html)

A little something else for you . . .

Date: 2007-10-21 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frayach-nicuill.livejournal.com
The End of a Marriage (http://frayach.livejournal.com/44114.html#cutid1)

Date: 2007-11-14 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rumpelgeist.livejournal.com
"One last word," I said in my horrible careful English, "are you quite, quite sure that – well, not tomorrow, of course, and not after tomorrow, but – well – some day, any day, you will not come live with me? I will create a brand new God and thank him with piercing cries, if you give me that microscopic hope."

"No," she said smiling, "no."

Lolita
Vladimir Nabokov

Date: 2007-11-14 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twistedm.livejournal.com
what an incredible response. i thank you for it.

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