Gave up and posted it

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Two people said they would look over the second chapter of "Green Beans and Fedoras," and two weeks later, neither of them has gotten around to looking at it. So... I just posted it anyway. I hope it doesn't stink!

At Skyehawke: http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=20300

and,
At AO3: http://archiveofourown.org/works/4223388/chapters/10439586